PMD: Hellfire (Discontinued! Continued on AO3 and Tumblr!)

A PMD webcomic

1-83 & 1-84

posted 18th Feb 2020, 9:00 AM

1-83 & 1-84
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18th Feb 2020, 9:00 AM

Samadriel

And that's it for chapter 1 x

Taking an indefinite hiatus while I figure out some changes to make with this comic c;

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view noblejanobii's profile

18th Feb 2020, 9:40 AM

noblejanobii

Oooh wonder what the ice types are up to

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18th Feb 2020, 4:56 PM

Blaze01

There's a link to a few tie-in fics on page 78. The Weavile, Froslass, and Char-cicle are from the third one.

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19th Feb 2020, 12:47 PM

noblejanobii

I was moreso referring to what they're doing with Kyurem-Black, but since I haven't had the chance to read the fic yet perhaps the answer lies there.

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view Samadriel's profile

19th Feb 2020, 1:11 PM

Samadriel

The fic doesn't reveal much so you're not missing much (they're mainly there as little bonuses) - In earlier pages there's a few references to the Weavile... but the rest is a mystery c;

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19th Feb 2020, 1:12 PM

noblejanobii

Oooh that's exciting! I definitely plan to read the fic though once my midterms are over.

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view dmr11's profile

18th Feb 2020, 1:28 PM

dmr11

That's Kyurem-Black, Kyurem wasn't happy when Bittercold happened, but it seems like this crisis is bad enough for them to break out the DNA Splicers.

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19th Feb 2020, 4:46 PM

BudgieGryphon

It has Kyurem-W’s head tuft as well and is missing most of its facial ice, which means this could be the Original Dragon.

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19th Feb 2020, 5:04 AM

Ngamer01

I'm going to offer a suggestion for Samadriel's consideration: Don't be in such a rush to enhance older pages because you'll get stuck in the mindset of always fixing pages after you originally release them and will have trouble figuring out how best to proceed.

It's ok to leave some info hanging because you could have use for it in the future like for flashback/summary/recap pages for example. If you still intend to use supplemental material, just note that people are lazy if you make heavy use of All There in the Manual.

If you have readers checking dozens of links just so they won't miss out on anything in Hellfire, they'll get tired of following your comic and will venture away to find another comic that's easier to follow.

In short: It's ok to not provide some information at this time. There will be opportunities in the future that you can make use of the info somehow in the form of flashbacks, summaries, or recaps.

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19th Feb 2020, 1:19 PM

Samadriel

I appreciate the advice, although I really wasn't planning on having this story be spread across both fics and comic haha. The story is and will always be self contained, but the extra fics are moreso writing practice, and little bonuses for those who decide to read them; relevant but not necessary.
The fic mentioned in the comment above isn't mandatory for understanding what's to come or what's being hinted at on this page ^^

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22nd Feb 2020, 6:35 AM

Salem Ga Kyokski (Guest)

The one on the far right looks like Discord

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6th Nov 2020, 10:47 AM

Guest

The far right one looks an awful lot like Discord, heh.

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